The middle of the circle.. what stands out better..
I think the white on red does, more than the red on white.. maybe put 'fresh' in bold.. emphasis it more..
Play with the pattern a bit more..where to put the info..
Used the orange from the different fragrance.. connect the fragrances in the poster?
Difficult to read I think.. though the type would be bigger on a larger scale poster..
Don't want too much writing.. and they pretty much will all do the same thing..
Doesn't show that it's a body lotion from first glance.. is this because of colour, or lack of imagery.. or the imagery used??
I think the background has made it feel more fresh.. is there a better image that I can use?
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